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Day Dreaming

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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T3i
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
149 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jul 6, 2014, 5:15:07 PM
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I'm here for critique for critique. For the most part this is a good photo.  But, there is too much space at the top. If there was less space, it would follow better rule of thirds composition. I like that her eyes are closed in a way, it kinda "says" one of those things that you can't explain. If that makes sense. I also like that her dress is a neutral color and that she doesn't have much make up on. It just makes the whole picture come together. Some things that bother me are that there are bright spots on the left side, they distract from the girl. And that you can see her fly away hairs and the hair on her arms. But the biggest thing is that there is too much extra space at the top. Last thing, I think she has a nice and natural looking pose. Sorry if I sound too negative and nit picky, but I think as a whole, it's a good photo.